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A short story I wrote a while back I won a keychain and a t-shirt with it!

#1 Bakayaro

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Posted 31 March 2005 - 01:32 AM

For our english class, we had to write a short story and then later submit it to some contest.

I won a t-shirt and a keychain (yay!!) with mine. It actually wasn't that easy, I think only 3 other people from the same class managed to accomplish that same feat.

But I don't really care about the prize. I'm curious to find how "good" this story was. I'm putting a link to it and hoping for some feedback.

Click here to download the story.

Note: I long ago gave up on the crappy "doramail" e-mail service, but it's still good for uploading stuff. (That handless cat got too tacky for me)

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#2 Lorian

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Posted 31 March 2005 - 12:27 PM

I would read it but I'm not a particularly keen reader and I can't be bothered... Sorry Fuhe

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